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MrFriendly

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Castle made of Sticks
« on: March 29, 2007, 04:23:07 PM »
I built a little castle, made of sticks.
It's built in a field, exposed to everything.
In my castle I am king, but only in my castle.
My castle is easily destroyed, because it's only made of sticks.
But it's ok, because it's only made of sticks.
I can easily build another castle, I'll make it out of sticks.
All are welcome to stay in my castle, my friends, my enemies.
The walls aren't strong, and there is no army to protect you, but my lodgers will support you.
In a castle made of sticks, you can't afford to make enemies.
In a castle made of sticks, you learn to laugh in the face of your rivals.
And when they burn down the castle, it's ok, because all it is, is sticks.

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Re: Castle made of Sticks
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2007, 05:12:01 PM »
thats pretty cool... trippy.. but cool :)

3ncryptd

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Re: Castle made of Sticks
« Reply #2 on: March 29, 2007, 05:31:15 PM »
Yep very cool and trippy.

Nice stuff MrF, I liked it. :)

(Im glad a few peeps are getting there stuff up in this new section. I might even contribute myself 1 day...)


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Re: Castle made of Sticks
« Reply #3 on: March 30, 2007, 07:28:37 AM »
hmmmmmmmm ..
mums and stuff


Doc

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Re: Castle made of Sticks
« Reply #4 on: March 31, 2007, 04:22:28 AM »
dont smoke the sticks mr F ;)

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Re: Castle made of Sticks
« Reply #5 on: March 31, 2007, 07:46:30 AM »
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dont smoke the sticks mr F ;)

Hehehe well if I didn't do that we wouldn't have this poem! :P

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Re: Castle made of Sticks
« Reply #6 on: March 31, 2007, 06:30:15 PM »


I loved the perverse logic "cos its only made of sticks" !!


Made sense to me...


I kept thinking of the words to that hendrix song "castles made of sand" .. same ideology as your yarn mrF ... nice!
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